WALT: understand the structure of a simile poem and write our own.
MY MUM
My Mum is as tall as a tower.
Mum is as stiff as a rock because she works for us and never stops.
She is as funny as a comedian.
She sleeps like a log and stays real still.
She is as loud as an elephant.
She is as beautiful as the sun.
WALT: Know why and how our oceans are being polluted
This is my first post.
We had a tsunami warning and this is my narrative writing piece, supported by a google drawing.
1M years ago there was a ghost ship that traveled all around the world for treasure the captain was monkey-D Luffy and his first mate roronoa Zoro the pirate hunter with a goal to become the world's best swordsman but will do anything to make Luffy's dream of becoming king of the pirates come true the current bounties are monkey-D Luffy with the bounty of 1.5B dollars and zoro the pirate hunter a bounty of 320M dollars
Chapter 2 Arlong park
There once was a sea king called arlong with the bounty of 20,000,000 but luffy used bounce man with a power level of 20,000 to send him flying into orbit walking off with a bounty of 1.7B Dollars after defeating an emperor of the sea he has been noticed by the government that he is a danger one year passes and Luffy has not been defeated his reputation has become strong he has grown a bigger crew god Usopp 300M bounty Cyborg franky 1B bounty zeus nami 230M bounty ninja sanji 1.9M bounty choppers bounty 100- broocks bounty 20000M and nico robins bounty 99999M and Luffy's new bounty 300B the bounty of a king
Chapter 3 kings throne
After 10 years with his crew the notorious pirate luffy has finally found the one peice but not without sacrifice broock nami and ussop had passed all from fighting to the death and now luffy is the pirate king.
WALT take information from a nonfiction text to complete a bio poem
Toroa
agile,precious,graceful,explorer
Lover of their preferred habitat the freezing Southern Ocean.
Who feels the humans are trying to keep them from a tasty snack.
Who needs the tube nose to remove sea salt from their system just like a vacuum.
Who gave the Pakeha and Maori decoration but the population went down to obtain it.
Who fears tori lines but little do they know fish hooks lead to their demise.
Who would like to get it's name off the endangered list for ever.
Who comes from the Southern Ocean to NZ to breed then leaves again for the next 4-10 years.
Albatross
Welcome to 2021. My name is Zaviah, this is my first post for 2021. Welcome, i I hope you enjoy my blogger this year
